see above

clouds

whisper mists as light as faint traces

puffs of white in blue with crisp breezes

sunrise tints them with pastel graces

sky flotillas sail as wind pleases

thunderhead giants attract gazes

rainbows appear as their rain eases

Reviews

[Gandré]

oh ... this was quite the singing poem, that's what we need, something we can read and come back and read again. "sky flotillas sail as wind pleases" this onomatopoeia is what I love in poems.

[Ferg]

You create beautiful word pictures! I can see the cloud-filled sky at dawn as I read this.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A sky picture in the mind. Well done!

[Tina Kline]

Your poem creates a very beautiful picture in my mind of clouds. Very well done. Really like it a lot.

[Ed Hart]

nice pleasant get up in the morning poem...