Springdrops

Springdrops

A Poem by James Paulin

dipple dop

rop

a blop

 

chill fills April rain

plops

sow bubbles round

puddles

 

dipple dop

          rop

               a

                 blop

 

damp fresh rizzle

crayons

new green blades

crisp

 

 dipple dop

          rop

               a

                 blop

 

red bud shells

trumpet

in descending concert   

unpopped

 

 

dipple dop

rop

a blop

 

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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This is wonderful I like the format as well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet. Love the formatting, which really gives this poem a finished touch and actually seems to play on its rhythm. Love the stanza with the crayons; so clean. Really nice work. Thanks for the fun read.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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