Here we go again

SEGUIDILLA

 

Let’s twist again as back when.

Up, down, round and round,

baby did we dip and spin

to that sing-song sound.

Twistin’ revives us,

still craving those joyful moves.

Damn it! Arthritis! 

Reviews

[topsyturvy]

Haha I liked this alot, short and cute, funnyyyyyy :P

[Ellen Hammond]

Cute twist at the end. I like it!

[cartera]

Revives us - Athritis
Yep. We'll let you away with that. Between athritis and RSI it's no life for a poet.
ATB
Alex.

[Ed Hart]

It ain't haiku, but I recognize the territory...

[Poeticpiers]

That final twist is superb

[Wildfleour]

I doubt even arthritis would stop you!

[Phibby Venable]

moving awfully fast, at least it took arthritis a while to catch you.
love the poem!

[Jenny Nelson]

Funny! Very entertaining and flows so fast and so well.