Dawn
A Poem by
James Paulin
AmeriKu
begin freshas night fades away morning blest sunrise, give praise
© 2010 James Paulin
Reviews
Magnificent!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very nice, it has a fresh and joyous feel to it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very nice, it has a fresh and joyous feel to it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nice. It reads like a devotional. I love it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice. It reads like a devotional. I love it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
amen...
Posted 14 Years Ago
amen...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nicely done! I like the little prayer part at the end.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nicely done! I like the little prayer part at the end.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
short and very sweet.
Posted 14 Years Ago
short and very sweet.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
simple,sweet and flowy;;;;;;
Posted 14 Years Ago
simple,sweet and flowy;;;;;;
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
a nice thought and great idea to make us aware.
Posted 14 Years Ago
a nice thought and great idea to make us aware.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A great poem!
Posted 14 Years Ago
A great poem!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 19, 2010
Last Updated on January 19, 2010
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James Paulin MI
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are ..
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