Dawn

Dawn

A Poem by James Paulin
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begin fresh

as night fades away

morning blest

sunrise, give praise

© 2010 James Paulin


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Magnificent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice, it has a fresh and joyous feel to it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice. It reads like a devotional. I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amen...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done! I like the little prayer part at the end.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and very sweet.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple,sweet and flowy;;;;;;

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a nice thought and great idea to make us aware.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 19, 2010
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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