Wind Chill

A Poem by James Paulin

Winter rages

blasts scream, buffet, blow

as bitter cold whips exposed.

raw flesh smarts till numb

© 2010 James Paulin

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Ed Hart

Yes, and I've met some women like that, too...

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gandré

this is a perfect Haiku. Almost suicide (as it shall be)

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poeticpiers

Powerful in its brevity

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sheila Kline

Oooooh, I can feel it stinging my flesh right now!! These winter blasts indeed may chill us to the bone!
You have expressed the bitter truth of "Old Man Winter" in few words....well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cest la vie

Yes, I think that about describes this current season. I am always amazed at how you are able to paint a big picture with just a few words. Talent my friend, pure talent..

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

miSS LEaf

interesting haiku, gives me the chill :)
thanks for inviting me to read this, and for the award :)
(L)

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on January 10, 2010
Last Updated on January 11, 2010
Tags: haiku

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James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..