Snow Squall

Snow Squall

A Poem by James Paulin
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Haiku

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intense powder swirls

clean views turn to milk cloud blurs

freezer  wrap tight clench

© 2010 James Paulin


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very nice. My Haiku teacher would say (what he always would do when I write like this "Haiku needs simple words to create great image"). Yet.. I can't help, I got wonderful image of Russian winter in the deep Russian country.. it's like Koliada-God had his fingers in this game.

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very nice. My Haiku teacher would say (what he always would do when I write like this "Haiku needs simple words to create great image"). Yet.. I can't help, I got wonderful image of Russian winter in the deep Russian country.. it's like Koliada-God had his fingers in this game.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

MI



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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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