Bubbles

Bubbles

A Poem by James Paulin

Inflation stirs imagination

Respirations blow floatation

Recreation to relaxation

Infatuation to contemplation

Carbonization or oxygenation

Celebration from fermentation

Flirtation from intoxication

Gasification lifts aviation

Mastication of gum for aeration

Exhalation stretches to optimization

Experimentation ends in a sticky situation

© 2009 James Paulin


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Congratulations! :D
Well deserved poem! Its very hilarious and creative! I liked the font too :P

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good use of all the "tions" and the "Experimentation ends in a sticky situation" was really funny. I loved that part. It is very creative, although I could have killed you for using this font. To put it bluntly... it's annoying to read. But it's a fun, creative, and the imagery is wonderful. You bring so much life and personification to one simple little bubble. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this great so far you have a good chance of winning

Posted 14 Years Ago


I LOVE THIS! You did such a great job in keeping the "-tion" pattern and it's just very creative ... I enjoyed it very much.

Nae-Nae ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH!! nice! i really enjoyed this! Bubbles are so much fun!!:)
great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An interesting style of thought and expression ... I wonder on the content full of metaphors ... good job!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice!!

so ingenious too..

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A very difficult thing to do, but you have done it well.
Well done.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very pretty :) I had to look up a few words, since I didn't know what they meant, but I do like the use of vocabulary here :) Awesome poem.

--Blood

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James, I love the beautiful fit of this..I think it is brilliant..I think my favorite is

Celebration from fermentation

Flirtation from intoxication

But each line is excellent!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 19, 2009

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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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