Zephyr

Zephyr

A Poem by James Paulin
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haiku

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cool caress relief

 

wafted wash to humid stick

elemental sooth

 

© 2010 James Paulin


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forgive me for answering your worthy haiku with one of my old favorites:

GOOD night! which put the candle out?
A jealous zephyr, not a doubt.
Ah! friend, you little knew
How long at that celestial wick
The angels labored diligent; 5
Extinguished, now, for you!

It might have been the lighthouse spark
Some sailor, rowing in the dark,
Had importuned to see!
It might have been the waning lamp 10
That lit the drummer from the camp
To purer reveille!


I just couldn't help it. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful, and leaves plenty to the imagination!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

forgive me for answering your worthy haiku with one of my old favorites:

GOOD night! which put the candle out?
A jealous zephyr, not a doubt.
Ah! friend, you little knew
How long at that celestial wick
The angels labored diligent; 5
Extinguished, now, for you!

It might have been the lighthouse spark
Some sailor, rowing in the dark,
Had importuned to see!
It might have been the waning lamp 10
That lit the drummer from the camp
To purer reveille!


I just couldn't help it. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

XD clever, you dont see many haiku's around here and thats a shame, keep up the good work :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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