Finale

Finale

A Poem by James Paulin
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haiku

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Snappy gusts of chill

Detaches garb aflutter

Autumn stage encore

 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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~shivers~ i love how the three lines confirm each other; the nearly equal lengths make this looks nicer :)
and autumn is my fav season, thanks for sharing your haiku ~L

Posted 14 Years Ago


a beautiful haiku. i always have enjoyed haiku as well executed ones give you a vivid setting, a philosophy to meditate on, and a sense of wonder.

*salutes you*

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another beautiful haiku. I love the words "Snappy gusts".. I can visualize the wind snapping my jacket or pants legs..Great poem!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 31, 2009
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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