Real Time Revelation

Life unfolds to each a story

some abruptly end, a  glimmer

some rich, full and prosperous

slow burning as if enchanted

 

Beware love of length of days

as reward unto itself

infinity outlasts all mortal things

seconds are as ages

 

Look beyond your moment

imagine being as the sun

warming life as it refreshes

energizing everyone

 

Importance of the weakest

to each a significance

conceived with purpose

equality too obvious to see

 

Gifts to all, enlightened or not

unto one as unto the whole

living sea  flowing in eternity

created to freely love itself

 

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

I can see how you would win first prize in the other contest you submitted this to.

This is what I call a "inspired" write. I loved each verse and its wisdom, but particularly this one:

"Look beyond your moment
imagine being as the sun
warming life as it refreshes
energizing everyone"

Thank you for "Keeping the Dream Alive!"

~ Helen ~

[Desert Dreamer]

We are each a unique creation of nature...inspirational writing.

[Tina Kline]

Very nice, enjoyed this a lot. There is an inspired feel to the words of this poem.

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the time contest!