Go Round

A Poem by James Paulin

laughter

kids spin then fall down

make themselves dizzy whirling round

silly

playing with equilibrium

giddy in every world swirl

free fun

© 2009 James Paulin

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Tina Kline

This is great. Brings back positive childhood memories.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Vincent Esprit FMI

this peace resounds in an evelasting sense of liberty.....which shows itself in the absense of puctuation marks......for kids there is only time..... outisde of stops,,,,great technique james.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Tate Morgan

no punctuation lol
Thank you!!!!
Tate

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damien Dsoul

The poem is delightful in every sense as it speaks of fun and of children having fun too while the narrator obseerves their playfulness.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sseoni

What a beautiful, fun, and free spirited poem! It was wonderful! Full of fun and joy! I loved it! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 30, 2009

Author

James Paulin

MI

About

After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..