Get Dizzy

Get Dizzy

A Poem by James Paulin
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Topsy-Turvy

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rotate

hang on monkey bars

cartwheels after break dancing spins

invert it

roll down green dandelion hills

tumble, stumble in jumble

handstand

 

 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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Good poem, very childish tone. The flow is particularly good in the last two lines "tumble, stumble in jumble / handstand" it merges together so well, as if you can visualize this happening in one fluid motion. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations on winning the jumbled contest!

Posted 15 Years Ago
Congrats a second time on your great winning poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem that returns one to their childhood days, I love it =]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats on your winning cameo!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on September 12, 2009
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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