Wave of Waves

Wave of Waves

A Poem by James Paulin
"

Write a double Etheree using this subject��waves�.

"

 

Hi

Whitecap

Flags flap high

Baseball bat swing

Hot weather gone by

Oscilloscope reading

Crime growing on the fly

Fields of grain swirling in the wind

Row after row of planes in the sky

Stadium crowd rotate up then sit down

Radio signal beamed from town to town

Shock effect felt in spreading stages

United States Navy female name

Symphony baton rages

Undulating hairdo

Fluttering gauges

Serpentine wall

Blown pages

Sonar

Bye

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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You've put it all together here for sure... rhyming, rhythm, a variety of waves, extreme intellectual creativity expressed within a tight criteria. Really enjoyed it. Of course there is one more kind of wave you've missed... I'll just have to write it...LOL
papaed

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. This was really cool. I love how you incorporated so many different possibilites for the word "wave." I also enjoyed your rhyme scheme. This had a great flow to it. Excellent job with the poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very special etheree. the rhyme was really unusual. awesome. tovli

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was interesting to read, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and subject matter. I loved how you organized this as well, very clever and creative.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 9, 2009
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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