I'm Sorry

Ten Words with Tovli

 

I have regrets today.
Am I willing to sustain
A change meant to stay?

Man tries to quickly explain
In words we all say
Love simply needs to heal pain.
With true sorrow display
The contrition will remain
Setting free delay.
Stars stop twinkling in vain.

 

Reviews

[Nae Nae]

Simple, yet honest, truthful, and impecibly amazing. It captures so much truth and emotion, but only in a few short lines.

i love it.

Nae-Nae ...

[Helena]

A super little write with the "ten" seamlessly interwoven in there! ~ Helena

[Tovli]

nicely done! tovli