Transient Buzz

 

Emanating spontaneously from enigmatic abodes, garnering

attention with ploys of perception, varying in volume and veracity,

 

abiding in a cerebral state, coexisting, intertwined and co-mingled

alongside reason and reality, inner voices resonate palpably.

 

Ethereal enticements, weakly whispered and  mesmerizing murmurs

inundate when surfacing suggestively, enunciating the extra sensory.

 

Advising articulations semi-consciously exhort enticements

as mystical mental infusions quickly glimmer impressively,

 

alternately advocating  integrity, inconsistency and indifference.

Mercurial messengers of pro versus con, prejudice and openness

 

and black or white spar subtlety to confirm or contradict consciences.

Repression strangles aspiration like justification blinds contrition

 

in paradoxical combinations. Physiological, spiritual or intellectual

minions infused in the psyche permeate the inner sanctum of the I. 

 

Strained souls consent selectively, accepting sacrificial commitment

or indulgent independence of the ultimate universal convergence.

 

 

Reviews

[Twilight]

In this poem, the wording is rather intelligent and concise. Despite not actually having a rhyme scheme, this piece does have a genuine structure. Furthermore, I believe that originality is very important, in order for poetry to remain an innovative form of art.

Every verse has more than one meaning, but I did not comprehend all of the meanings in this piece. Even so, there is no doubt that this poem is thought-provoking, and it's the first by James Paulin, which I have reviewed. Thankyou, for sharing this with your fellow members of my Group, "Twilight's Disciples"! Keep writing, reading, sharing AND reviewing! Who will be the next person, to add some writing to my Group?

[Inkcognito]

phew!...serious concentration is required for this highly "intellectual' piece with it's intricately woven messages and convaluted vocab...I will have to read it a few more times in order to fully grasp the intended essence thereof...

[Scarlett]

You have an interesting style of writing, using, for the most part, 3 parts per line/verse, rather than 2 or 4. I feel, whether this is intentional or not, that this shows the illogical thoughts of a person, rather than the usual structure. I also feel this is reflected in the quick thoughts, strings of words, etc, which is quite realistic as a thought process. I like the alliteration, which helps to emphasise certain phrases, and the intelect - however, I do feel that this may alienate some part of your intended audience, as they may not understand everything you are trying to convey. Apart from that, it's a very good piece.

[Tony]

Yeah, this is pretty good too, James.
Although no one but us intellectuals will ever understand what you are saying...LOL
Mercurial messengers of pro versus con, prejudice and openness. Indeed.

[Wicahpi]

I had to read it three times to be sure that I soaked in
each word and it's meaning and if read slowly, it becomes
vividly clear. This is not meant to be through in a huff or
hurriedly. This definitely makes one "think".

[Emily Quinn]

there are most definitely many different interpretaions in each stanza; actually in each line. its a very well done piece and I enjoyed kind of deconstructing the many meanings in my own opinion.

[bubbles]

u sent me a read request so i feel i ned to review but im afraid the text font and long list of complicated unusual words combined with my dyslexia ment i could not properly read it :)
good vocab