Sunburn

A Poem by James Paulin

Haiku

mid-summer picnic sun

lazy day relaxation

red skin screams “aloe!”

© 2009 James Paulin

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Archia

Oh that's a funny last line; it's so true. This so well described a sun-burn and how it comes.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nancy Lee Shrader

Great Haiku

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 14, 2009

Author

James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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