About Poetry

About Poetry

A Poem by James Paulin
"

Kimo

"

imagination, a necessity

themes carry through entirely

avoids verbosity  

 

rhyme and meter or free verse employing

linguistic undertaking

word choice is painstaking

 

poems glimmer sedately to bright in sight

emotional tears to delight

sanguine to grotesque fright       

 

romantic, poignant, comedic and more

titles allude to rapport

flows out from the hearts core

 

 

 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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Oh my friend you ve come that close..for I think you cant define poetry
i think its the greatest science ever known for you dont use any technique but your mind
you just wait for him to call out,for he is silent lots of times,you need his imagination
To help you create the most beautiful things out of nothings,out of the ugliest things
you wait and wait,try to allure him and tickle that mind to start to sing..
you try to feed him lots of words and ideas you collect here and there
then wait for him to process all and bring them out in the best of shapes
you will wonder where all thoughts came from,for I never had them before
and you wonder at your mind what a lovely thing you are..
you bring me poetry ,bring creativity right to my hands
though I take good care of you,you have failed me a lot
Yet you never failed me at lots of times..thank you ,Mind..
That was a lovely write ,you can tell so much about it..
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes, I think you have captured what poetry is very nicely in this piece.

"poems glimmer sedately to bright in sight
emotional tears to delight
sanguine to grotesque fright "

This is a wonderful verse and is my fav.. Truly a well written piece. Good Luck!!


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is the quinticential definition under websters poetry bravo

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh my friend you ve come that close..for I think you cant define poetry
i think its the greatest science ever known for you dont use any technique but your mind
you just wait for him to call out,for he is silent lots of times,you need his imagination
To help you create the most beautiful things out of nothings,out of the ugliest things
you wait and wait,try to allure him and tickle that mind to start to sing..
you try to feed him lots of words and ideas you collect here and there
then wait for him to process all and bring them out in the best of shapes
you will wonder where all thoughts came from,for I never had them before
and you wonder at your mind what a lovely thing you are..
you bring me poetry ,bring creativity right to my hands
though I take good care of you,you have failed me a lot
Yet you never failed me at lots of times..thank you ,Mind..
That was a lovely write ,you can tell so much about it..
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written, with nice rhyming. A lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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