One

One

A Poem by James Paulin

 

 

 

One planet

One God - some forget

One rule of love is set

© 2009 James Paulin


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Well written

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting piece, but I'm not sure what you are getting at with the last line compared to the rest. I like the format though.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on July 5, 2009
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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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