Bridal Veil

Bridal Veil

A Poem by James Paulin

 

subtle sense of apparition

apprehension as if in dreams

in early haze, mystic vision

up to review first flush of creams

 

floating thin, then inconsistent

definition seeks views distant

 

lookout east, above restful lake

stretched clouds tint pastel hues

sunbeams ascend soon at daybreak

mist most sheer flows upward to blues

 

this day begins with wedding vow

to have and hold my bride of now

 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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Up to view the early morning mist rolling over the waters as the rising sun kisses the edge of the horizon.
The mist would resemble the rolling and billowing of a giant bridal train. You married the morning and will embrace the day as your mate. Beautiful greeting of a perfect view and a new day of enjoying the moments that are given to you. Your pen flows so eloquently on this work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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sunbeams ascend soon at daybreak mist most sheer flows upward to blues
beautiful images for a new beginning within a graceful poem, loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sunrise as a time to be married with hints that the sun is the bride and the morning mist as wedding gown, beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh the imagery is spectacular. the only thing that im not so fond of is the last night. bride of now. do you plan on leaving her?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful! Love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply divine!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Up to view the early morning mist rolling over the waters as the rising sun kisses the edge of the horizon.
The mist would resemble the rolling and billowing of a giant bridal train. You married the morning and will embrace the day as your mate. Beautiful greeting of a perfect view and a new day of enjoying the moments that are given to you. Your pen flows so eloquently on this work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hi James,

Wedded to the new day--very nice! I like the lines:

up to review first flush of creams
floating thin,

it brings to mind a bride's complection or dress.

Kathee


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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