To Do

To Do

A Poem by James Paulin
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compression poem

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remember then

past, dim and faded

no thought what might have been

hope and change are ahead

wiser with reason

today is when

© 2009 James Paulin


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Very nice indeed Jim. Much enjoyed and wonderful
submission to Sal's contest! ~ Helena

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well done! I like the way lines one and six wrap up the poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on June 16, 2009

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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