Intuitive

Intuitive

A Poem by James Paulin
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Two questions

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will yes

offer kindness

simply

to provide instead of take

 

forgiveness

treats the wound

that is impossible to unmake

 

will yes

visualize harmony

when silent

views blur opaque

 

peace prevails,

enmity fails,

if denied

intolerance for supremacy’s sake

© 2009 James Paulin


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ATG
This was an interesting read. It flowed very well between stanzas. I also enjoyed the unique choices of rhyme. Overall, a good read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this. That second stanza is my favorite. This could go so well describing a relationship of some sort or politics or even religious differences. Kudos.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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