Eyes

haiku

pupils give lessons

stray views refuse insight light

seeing inside out

Reviews

[N. N. Grainger]

difficult to stick to the rules of haiku isn't it, you nailed it here, i very rarely haikus but i liked this one well done. i like the way you've used science and enfused it with emotions and life, like how you say pupils give lessons and the reflection inside out part which is quite scientific but also hints on the way we perceive things, i hope im right, im having a bit of difficulty articulating at this moment but good write anyway well done.

peace xxx

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this great winning haiku

[Butterflymom]

Very nicely written......I love Haiku, and you nailed it!

[Tanya]

Beautifully written. I love your take on the subject.