A Boy in Blue Sat on the Moon

Poem inspired by my lack of shutters. Hello, Moon.

A boy in blue sat on the moon,

his eyes reflected the stars,

The world he knew was pale and cold,

"it's lonely up here, eh Mars ?"

down he went, leaving stars behind,

greeting the unknown with glee,

on Earth he met a little girl,

she invited him in for tea,

he stayed awhile and had much fun,

They laughed and sang for hours,

the girl had taught him how to run,

He witnessed warm spring showers,

but soon he missed his dear, dear moon,

he had to say goodbye,

he packed a bag and kissed her cheek,

Returning to the sky,

but every night the boy looks down,

and spots a little home,

he knows who lives there and smiles,

no more is he alone.

Author's Note

Kind of want to make this into a children's book, anyone wanna illustrate ?

Reviews

[fejia]

I like this :) this is cute and lovely and just as it's supposed to be.

[DoormanDan]

This would make an AMAZING children's book! Even before I read your author's note I thought that this was like something out of a children's book. This is 178.9% fantastic! :)

[Fischerry]

Thanks for your reviews!! Glad you like it :D

[Gee]

Great flow and rhyming,so easy to read and a cute little tale as a bonus.Sweet.

[Fischerry]

Thanks so much!