Serenity

Serenity

A Poem by Jason
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senryu #1

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Serenity loves

Those who hold peace in their minds

And peace in their world

 

© 2008 Jason


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Posted 10 Years Ago


Isn't that the truth? That's probably why so many people are depressed... I think somehow religion is involved. >:(

lol Anyways, neat piece. It's flowy, easy to understand, and has a good vibe to it. ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 16 Years Ago


wonderful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Not the easiest in the World to write, Jason... Peace... Isn't that what we all want...?
Nice...

Posted 16 Years Ago


Indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a pretty little Senryu. Nice thoughts. It reads like a bumper sticker or a slogan. Quite catchy.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hi Jason, this is a wonderful write with so few words. This is more of a Senryu than Haiku though. A Haiku mostly deals with nature or nature related things. Whatever though, I loved the thoughts contained within this write.

Missy

Posted 16 Years Ago


It makes me feel good =]

Posted 16 Years Ago


Oh yay!! Short and sweet. Love the message. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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