Dead dream

 

This dream of you-

It never really existed

It was like a glare of sunlight

In a pane of glass

And it just faded

Behind the clouds

 

Meteors had

Held more life

And held more beauty

Than this reverie

As memories burn

Like vapor in the sky

 

There is no

Water to wash

The bruises

From the land

Or to fertilize

New dreams

 

There is just

The faded sunlight

And empty seeds

That are planted

Beneath dead trees

Reviews

[closed account]

ooh, I like this,, I know too well the sentiment!! very nice..

[Jennifer]

This feels like a lost relationship that went on for a long time.

[ANNA]

wow.This is very good..Loved the last part when you said:
There is justThe faded sunlight
And
Empty seeds
That are planted
Beneath dead trees

deep sad and grip you for the moment you though
It was was over but you grip the reader imagination
Surprise us with your poetry
thank you for sending me your poem
Love to read more, anytime

Anna

[Lyra H]

Well done!