Because Of You

 

Because of you

I don’t get close to anyone

I hide away from all the could be’s

 

Because of you

My mind plays tricks on me

And I toss and turn at night

 

You took the best of me

I want that part of me back

You can’t have it anymore

 

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

Perhaps this could be longer, it seems like its missing verses, or missing a steadier progression to the collapse, almost like it happens to quickly. The emotion is thick and strong and the ideas projected smoothly and clearly

[misha]

Great job on the poem there is a lot of emotion in it