I'm Agitated

Just a poem!

I'm agitated...Feeling aggravated... I want to see you... Breathe you... But you're out of my reach... My golden peach... I grasp for you... Only to gasp for you... I can't touch you... Oh Just want to clutch you... Roll you up in my hand... Fold you up in my hand... Place you in my pocket... And shoot off like a rocket... Across the outer regions of space... Gazing at your face... Until my eyes are stuck wide open... And... And my pupils are swollen... Basking in your essence... Devouring your presence... Until my belly aches... Until my soul awakes... Feed me baby your mental energy... I'm starving for you internally... Let me swallow your soul... Your heart is my goal... You've really got a hold... On this heart of gold... That's yearning to love you... Longing to rub you... Dying to kiss you... Wanting to frisk you... Just to feel you... Luv let me steal you... And bury you in my heart... My sweet chocolate counterpart... Oh darling I'm agitated... Feeling aggravated... Lying in bed thinking of you... Of me sinking in you... Becoming one with you... Never being done with you... Eternally feasting on you... Greedily eating on you... Until I end... Where you begin... And... And you begin... Where I end... And we are entwined... In an endless bind... Bound in passion... I'm your pleasure assassin... Killing you softly between the sheets... Where pain and pleasure meets... Planting soft wet kisses... In all the places I miss... Etching my name in your flesh... With my potent caress... I'm agitated... Feeling aggravated... Waiting for you to come... And make my body succumb... To your every brush... Every kiss... Every stroke... Falling deeper into your abyss... Where I'm lost in you... Heat up and defrost in you... Yes baby it's true... I badly want you... I'm agitated... Feeling aggravated... 

Reviews

[Nipplegrinder]

I'm enamored with this for so many frickin reasons. First, I'm jealous as f**k. This simply drips with passion.
Gahd.
Then, the ellipses.
Such a great tool to force the reader
to concentrate on each syllable uttered.
This is exceptional.
I am so thrilled to discover this.

[fireangelpoet]

Lol, thank you, I'm glad you obviously enjoyed it, and I appreciate the jealousy.... Lol

[Indra's Child]

Alright, that's it, I'm a subscriber. Two poems and I'm hooked. Love your writing style.

[repituugjng]

Wow, your diction throughout this piece was outstanding. Great work!

[fireangelpoet]

Well thank you very much, I am studying to become a wordsmith. Lol