Compulsively Obsessing

Compulsively Obsessing

A Poem by FireFly

The same thought

Over and over

Banging around inside my skull

Fighting for importance

As I strive for indifference

 

Look at it

No, I really don't need to know

Look at it, look at it

Side-eyeing the material

I could just look once

Maybe...

Maybe just a quick look

© 2012 FireFly


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FireFly
Not sure what I think about this..reviews are much appreciated =)

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I have felt this way and if i don't stop it doesn't move me forward.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The poem is small but spectacular.
I guess you are talking about the compulsion
to look at yourself. Who cares ? Take a good
look , see if you can find a flaw. Who cares ?
Every time you find a flaw, add someone who loves
you. "Soon you will have an immense score.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I enjoy this a lot. good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


cute(: short and mysterious!

good write!
~a
100.100

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it, it is short yet it still gets the full idea across to the reader

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful poetry loved reading it

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 6, 2012
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