fluttering hope

fluttering hope

A Poem by marco
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just passing thought and feelings of what is unknown to me. this is my first one, so hopefully i get better.

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They don't know what its like when the air is cold and light is gone.
When hope has faded and despair has triumphed. 
False promises and dead dreams weigh the hearts of the strongest man. I can never wake softly.
 
All life ever does is cost me. 
With cloudy days and an unseen, distant future. It make the present hard to prosper. 
My life! My dreams and hopes! Broken? Shattered and forgotten like old kings, that have fought for the lives of many.
Those that deserve glory are often left feeling sorry. Because they died for nothing, no one ever telling their story. 
Just like my hopes and dreams.

© 2015 marco


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I agree with wordman, sometimes things go our way, and sometimes
they just don't! Well written and expressed, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hopes and dreams are like kites,sometimes they fly,and sometimes they don`t

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on March 14, 2015
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marco
marco

toronto, ontario, Canada



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young and just trying to find a path through life more..