Come Back!

VERSE ONE:
this world is a pain fest and each breath is a war
I don't think I'm winning as I cry on the floor
I just want the end to come
there's no hope for anyone to save me

CHORUS:
make him come back, mother
I would like his warmth
like abandoned lovers
I am feeling torn
between living for a day with him
and thinking that will never ever come
why am I hurt?

VERSE TWO:
this is the third time but I'm surprised
I thought I saw lifeboats in his eyes
I just want another chance
I am never going to dance with him

CHORUS:
make him come back, mother
I would like his warmth
like abandoned lovers
I am feeling torn
between living for a day with him
and thinking that will never ever come
why am I hurt?

BRIDGE:
he is the only part of me I love
he's my guardian angel from above and
I will never make it out alive
if I never look in those eyes again

CHORUS:
he won't return, mother
my insides are hurt
I crawl under the covers
I feel like dirt
I want to drown in happiness but
will it come from death or love with him?
is there a difference?
why am I hurt?

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

This is beautifully tragic, Fiore. The very top two lines just set the emotion for this piece. Captivating and wrenching. Wonderful talent!! The BRIDGE is perhaps my favorite part, but it's difficult to say considering I felt every word. Also... 'I want to drown in happiness but will it come from death or love with him? Is there a difference?' So profound. Love it! Thank you so much for sharing.

[Fiore! :D]

Thank you so much, Kylie baby! I tell you, it is a PLEASURE getting to know you through our artwork. Keep on writing.

[Deviant Works]

You are so very welcome, Fiore! The pleasure is all mine.:)