This Mess

Look at this mess you've made
Singing out toxic rain
You don't deserve love
Why are you sad when you're above the clouds?

Your blood delivers pain to your chest
You'll never clean this mess
You're sinking back down
But the ground is still too far away for danger

you go away
I dare to lay on my side
I can not fix or hide or deny this mess

Reviews

[The Revisionist]

I can feel a great stabbing in my chest as I read. Powerful and well done.

[Fiore! :D]

Thanks. Stay strong, love