Moving on

Moving on

A Poem by Jane Doe

I hear our song,
Then cry,
But we're over so,
I really don't know why.

You cheated on me,
Not once, but twice,
Only death for myself,
Will suffice.

Its like that one song,
Whiskey lullaby,
But baby it's time,
To say goodbye.

I will never know,
How if you felt is true,
All I do know,
Is I truly did love you.

But baby it's gone,
We're over, we're done,
But baby those 6th months,
Were pretty fun.

But now I must get over it,
I gained experience from this,
But my only true way out,
Is death, only then will I obtain bliss.

© 2012 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
i've felt suicidal lately :/

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Hey lil Pinay Princess, came by to check up on ya...I love the emotions in your poem...ya know, you may be heart broken over this guy, and he may be a great guy, but there are other great guys out there, to meet...going through a break up is never easy, rest assured all wounds heal and feeling suicidal is not the answer...moving on is the best thing to do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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No advice, I've felt your pain. Keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jane Doe

12 Years Ago

Thanks(:
Hey lil Pinay Princess, came by to check up on ya...I love the emotions in your poem...ya know, you may be heart broken over this guy, and he may be a great guy, but there are other great guys out there, to meet...going through a break up is never easy, rest assured all wounds heal and feeling suicidal is not the answer...moving on is the best thing to do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 31, 2012
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Jane Doe

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