How I love thee

How I love thee

A Poem by Jane Doe

Hark my fair sir, 
Come hither by my side.

You rush over majestic land,
Coming for me stride by stride.

Hark my fair maiden,
My love whom awaits me.

Will the lord ever let us be?
Will the lame walk?
Will blind ever see?
Though nothing compares to how much I love thee.

No fiery sword,
Or a billion meteors,
Could set our love a fire anymore than it is.

Will the earth end tomorrow?
If so I hope I am in your arms,
Because they are my personal shield, safe from all harms.

If the Lord dont want us together,
I am sorry but I would disobey him,
For you my all, my life, my light, my gem. 

Alas wedding bells ring,
Alas joy has found the fair,
Maiden and sir quiet the pair.

Will the lame walk?
Will blind ever see?
Though nothing compares to how much I love thee,
Forever we shall be.

© 2012 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
First version is short, second is sorta moderner (more modern)

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Wonderful and so full of light about the possibilities we are coming to face in the revelations of the world today. Sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I aspire to write as beautiful as this poem is.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You Shakespearean Approach to this piece made it deeper and more Romantic, and It also Showed the intensity of your Deep passionate love for your Significant other. Wonderful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a gem of awesomeness

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and awesome:) It's a gem of its kind.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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