Alex

Alex

A Chapter by Jane Doe

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October, 19th still

 

I found a hobo, on the side of the street and decided to befriend him. His name Alexander, apparently I may just refer to him as the hobo or friend. He shared his fire with me and he was very flattering and nice, so I split my orange and we each had a few sips of milk. I figured I will need as much food as I can get so I will keep my bread a secret for later meals of mine. I enjoy my friends company but he snores very loud, very irritating.  I hope we do not become attached it would be very unfortunate to once again lose a loved one. I would even miss his snoring, he sounds like a broke clogged up train.  I am going to splash some water on him and pretend to be asleep maybe it will stop his snoring.

In case I do end up fall asleep then I guess this is goodnight, I had an eventful day. My stomach is full, my feet ache and my head is throbbing thanks to Alex. But in the orphanage I was taught to be quiet and to have ladylike manners. I may not do the water splashing jig after all, he has stopped. But now it seems he is… not breathing. I have to go I will write tomorrow or later tonight.

Love always, Emma



© 2012 Jane Doe


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Wow, I hope Alexander is okay, maybe, in a drunken stupor, or maybe, something did happen...really interesting...yet, it is an allegory, that teens should not travel this destructive path...to make a mistake and many more doesn't help...if you make a mistake, do your best to correct it, because as teens, everyone is involved. Lovely writing style Pinay Princess. ;)

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Wow, I hope Alexander is okay, maybe, in a drunken stupor, or maybe, something did happen...really interesting...yet, it is an allegory, that teens should not travel this destructive path...to make a mistake and many more doesn't help...if you make a mistake, do your best to correct it, because as teens, everyone is involved. Lovely writing style Pinay Princess. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful Storyline, i love the interchange between the Characters :) Nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a good chapter. I hope the dude didn't die. Well thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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