The beggining!

It was a bright sunny day ironically the weather did not depict our mood whatsoever; we had just discovered I was pregnant. My mother would kill me for sure, and my father would take the liberty of killing Gray. We slowly and dreadfully walked to my house; unfortunately my father was home my mother was nowhere to be seen. We sat him down and explained our misfortune; it seemed as if two months have passed, but only a mere minute had before my father jumped up grabbing Gray by the throat and hitting him repetitively. Moments later my mother walked through the door and when my father explained the little ordeal that had just begun, my mother sighed and went to my room. Moments later she had packed my stuff, then she tossed two suitcases out of the house, then Gray, and myself were requested to leave and never return. I sulked, while Gray limped back to his house. I was chased by his mother and a hot iron, and he was again brutally beat, he stormed up to his room with as much anger and steadiness as he could muster packed his stuff and then we left.

We traveled four miles, till we found the closest motel the price was cheap so we stayed a while. Nine months later we took a trip to the hospital, I gave birth to a beautiful baby girl. I named her Emma Lee; she had thick, curly, midnight black hair. Pale complexion and baby blue eyes, we left two days after she had opened her eyes.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

The hardship for young female teens, who aren't ready for pregnancy and taking care of a child has been depicted well in your intro...I believe that this avoidable, yet it sadly happens on a daily basis...very well done...just brush up on the spelling, nevertheless, the story line is intriguing, especially, a teen at your age writing such a heavy topic. Nicely done.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. You did a nice job on it. Thanks for sharing.