That moment

read? please?

That moment in life,
Full of pain and strife,
I need you there,
I look everywhere,
But you are no where to be seen.

I look to my left,
I look to my right,
But my armored knight,
Is no where in sight.

For he is up in his castle,
Frown on his face,
And in his heart it seems,
Upsetness has taken my place,
They say from miles away you'll hear my sobs and screams.

A frown creeps,
Lurking in the shadows of my smile,
Behind my gleaming eyes,
Tears, enough to fill the nile.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

"Tears, enough to fill the nile" - WOW! greatly expressed, and the sorrow and distrust is something I can relate to. Great job!! :)

[stars are far]

This was so greatly done ..
Keep that goin here ... :D