My fault

My fault

A Poem by Jane Doe

Always my fault

Why didn't you stop it,
Why did you let it happen,
how are we suppose to top it?
Why do you keep yapping?

It's all my fault,
But don't agree,
For if you do my wrist won't appreciate,
What might happens to me.

If I am upset,
Just never listen,
Cause I will bet,
My feelings will go astray and my heart amissing. 

At least you tried to help,
But let's not try again,
For it only broke my heart,
It may never mend. 

Shattered right on the floor,
Into a million pieces,
It happened cause I was foolish practically asked you to walk out the door,
Now I'm in a pile of feces. 

I thank you for you help,
But then begin to yelp ,
Cry and whine,
My heart is yours but it's hurt like a burning from the sun in summertime. 

© 2012 Jane Doe


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My thoughts resemble a very personal connection to the message. Thanks for the emotional read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Burns at the eyes to read, a most propelled thought, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*cries*.........................................................

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, very emotional. nice write.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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