Chapter 2

A Chapter by Jane Doe

"W***e, where the hell are you?!" My step loser, Frank, yelled from his bedroom, just as I slipped down the stairs quiet as a mouse. I grabbed a banana and tiptoed out the back door, as soon as the door was completely shut. I head foot steps decending, my eyes became wide and seconds later i caught sight of him.

He had not yet seen me, I ducked and became to scall the side of the house till I reached the place where the forest and our property met. I dodged behind a tree moments before Frank opened the door screaming into the wind.

"I WILL find you w***e, and when I do.... OH YOU ARE SO GOING TO REGRET IT!" Slamming the door shut, I waited about a minute and decided it was safe.

I began to slowly walk towards the street just as I reached the bearing a 2006 orange mazada slowed down to meet me half way. I opened the door and I went half deaf, but then I realized the song and just sang along.

" Nobody gonna love me better, I must stick with you "

Kayla saw the bruise on my right calf and her eyes widened, she reached for the volume knob.

The car swerved, and a red BMW came into view I opened my mouth but before I could yell my warning we were hit.

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© 2012 Jane Doe

Author's Note

review? maybe.... might erase book lol its a bad attempt

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Tomislav Petricevic

Don't erase the book, I like it! It's quite interesting. And that nonsense about your character not being believeable that I saw - not true. I mean, your character is original! Why shouldn't she be whining & saying that her friend is selfish? We don't always get to see that kind of characters, and you just managed to bring us something like that. And that's why the character is good, because it's not one of those typicall boring characters we read about everywhere. Keep up writing :)