Disappointment

Disappointment

A Poem by Jane Doe

I'm a disappointment,
To all,
Even when I seem to be doing good,
I fail and fall.

I piss him off,
Then I cry,
Because I didn't mean to do it,
I don't know how it happened or why.

I lay here cuddling my baby,
Thinking about you and the pain I have caused,
I am a downfall to all,
I don't deserve a round of applause.

Maliya is so warm,
So sweet,
Then there is my heart,
So cold and the difference makes me weep.

© 2012 Jane Doe


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I like it, but your really cool, and you aint a dissappointment, ur kewelio's :)

xoxo
Allie-bear~

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was really sad. I don't think your a disappointment. You're a really sweet person. I know you care about people. Everyone does do something wrong like SoulCrusader said. I liked the write though. I mean I know how you feel. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very relatable piece of writing...
sometimes everything we do seems to go wrong...
we try to analyse...but still samethings happen

Loved this great write :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 16, 2012
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