Bullying

Bullying

A Poem by Jane Doe

Bullying

Anyway to escape,
To stop the lies,
No one listens no one can relate,
There is no possibility of drying my eyes.

They yell,
They scream,
Haunting me while I dream,
I jumped off the ledge and they continued after I fell.

Only one way,
Out,
No one to help me,
No matter how loudly shout.

I didn't know what to do,
I didn't know how to stop it so I began to throw a fit,
They continued to harass me,
Eventually I just lost it.

© 2012 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
For English, gave it to my guidance conselor!(: I have a chance to compete in California for it!(:

Xoxo
~a

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Whaaaa the whaaaat! Whaaaa the whoo! This is wonderful, WOW, just superb poetry flowing from your pen...you talk on topics that are deep, yet with such elegance...Bullies suck...but just do you...there will always be Haters in life that can't think on their own...I call them sheeps...they talk like they are liberated but they are not...you have strong thoughts...and that's what matters, if you want to lead. ;)

Lil Pinay Princess does it again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow!!! Brilliantly written on a very difficult subject. Hope that the bullying has now stopped!!! You have an amazing talent. Make sure you continue to use it. Feel free to read and comment on some of my work some time especially those with no comments yet. Many thanks. Steve

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a great piece. I loved this a lot. I hate bullying with a passion. This subject is so sensitive. I hate when people pick on others. Then again we never know what happens to the bully. So them being the bully means they either need help at home or something....I hate that people can't see the harmful effects of bullying. It's so wrong and it's hurtful. I don't know why they do what they do...but people's lives are always in danger. They don't see the warning signs. Great poem though. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow I like this! It's really nice! And it explains how a lot of people getting bullied feel in just so many words :) amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i agree with everett This is a Masterpiece, you have taken the Fiendish thing of bullying, and you have made us feel the pain of it. Makes me regret some of the times I bullied somebody when I was younger. but at the same time, you wove a tapestry knitted with the Fabric of the soul! my favorite line:

They yell,
They scream,
Haunting me while I dream,
I jumped off the ledge and they continued after I fell.

From a former bully, to you... I am sorry
Great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have a strong stance against bullying, and being one who has been bullied myself for things I had no control over, this hits home.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Whaaaa the whaaaat! Whaaaa the whoo! This is wonderful, WOW, just superb poetry flowing from your pen...you talk on topics that are deep, yet with such elegance...Bullies suck...but just do you...there will always be Haters in life that can't think on their own...I call them sheeps...they talk like they are liberated but they are not...you have strong thoughts...and that's what matters, if you want to lead. ;)

Lil Pinay Princess does it again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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