Whaaaa the whaaaat! Whaaaa the whoo! This is wonderful, WOW, just superb poetry flowing from your pen...you talk on topics that are deep, yet with such elegance...Bullies suck...but just do you...there will always be Haters in life that can't think on their own...I call them sheeps...they talk like they are liberated but they are not...you have strong thoughts...and that's what matters, if you want to lead. ;)
Wow!!! Brilliantly written on a very difficult subject. Hope that the bullying has now stopped!!! You have an amazing talent. Make sure you continue to use it. Feel free to read and comment on some of my work some time especially those with no comments yet. Many thanks. Steve
This was a great piece. I loved this a lot. I hate bullying with a passion. This subject is so sensitive. I hate when people pick on others. Then again we never know what happens to the bully. So them being the bully means they either need help at home or something....I hate that people can't see the harmful effects of bullying. It's so wrong and it's hurtful. I don't know why they do what they do...but people's lives are always in danger. They don't see the warning signs. Great poem though. Thanks for sharing. :)
i agree with everett This is a Masterpiece, you have taken the Fiendish thing of bullying, and you have made us feel the pain of it. Makes me regret some of the times I bullied somebody when I was younger. but at the same time, you wove a tapestry knitted with the Fabric of the soul! my favorite line:
They yell,
They scream,
Haunting me while I dream,
I jumped off the ledge and they continued after I fell.
From a former bully, to you... I am sorry
Great write
Whaaaa the whaaaat! Whaaaa the whoo! This is wonderful, WOW, just superb poetry flowing from your pen...you talk on topics that are deep, yet with such elegance...Bullies suck...but just do you...there will always be Haters in life that can't think on their own...I call them sheeps...they talk like they are liberated but they are not...you have strong thoughts...and that's what matters, if you want to lead. ;)