Curiosity kills(:

Horror

(: Curiosity kills

The doorbell rings,
Making odd dongs and dings,
She races to the door to greet,
But what she sees you would not like to meet.

A head hanging,
From the roof banging,
Against the glass door,
The head of an acquaintance, for it was a head of a w***e.

She slams the door shut,
Heart racing, tears streaming shes scared she might find the body of the s**t,
The dog barks,
On her back something begins to make marks.

She swirls and screams,
As once again the doorbell rings,
This time it is not the head but a figure, 
a ,mysterious, decked out in black, ski mask on, figure.
 
             To be continued...... Possibly.

Author's Note

Ya like I think I'm pretty sucky at all genres

Reviews

[THIS ACCOUNT IS CLOSED]

This is creepy, scary, and tormenting all at the same time.... The rhythm is a little hard to follow, but its a good write... Maybe you can try rewording someof the things, and Take out some of the Redundant words Maybe it would flow better :)

Still a creative and wonderful write :) Great Job :)

If you Message me I can show you what I mean if your interested :)

[SINDE]

Quite unnerving! This is a great piece with a good flow and a story behind it characterised by twists as in an action film. Keep that pen moving 'cause I'm pressing for the sequel!

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

best poem of 2012 thus far =DD 100000 likes***

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an interesting poem. You did a really nice job on this poem. Yes, curiosity can kill. It's not good to open the door to strangers. As you learn on all the crime shows these days. I liked the message. Good write. :D
Thanks for sharing.

[Everett DeValle]

Hey its the Lil Pinay Princess...whaaa the whaaat, there was a head of a w***e?! Holy Spanoli, body of s**t!! Whaaa the whaaat! I hope everything is okay...I would of been scared out of my mind...sheesh. Nice rhythm to your poem. :)

[Susan]

This is a really nice poem so far. And I only say so far, because it doesn't seem finished, and I really hope that you do continue it. Your word choice creates a setting of emotions, making me get into the moment and wanting more!

[UnOrThOdOx]

You are not "sucky" at all genres LOL! You are VERY good at writing!! I love how intense this is!! If you do continue it, I'd be intrigued as to how you'd go on with this. Great job! =]