Your love

Your love,
Is my downfall,
I can't stand to be away,
From you at all.

It's like I need you,
Your my brand of heroin,
You the twist to my plot,
On my life you pt your own little spin.

Added a little love,
Took away some strife,
Led me to believe,
 This is an amazing life.

When you left,
You took my heart,
You took the happiness I once possessed,
But you taught me a lesson I am now smart.

Smart about love,
Decisions,
And now free,
As a dove.

I use to dream about you,
Coming back for me,
Thinking about everything you do,
To my heart, making me think of you, me, us, we.

Then one day I didn't have to dream anymore,
Presence or not,
Either way you are the one I will always adore,
If I have to sleep outside, in another country, or on a cot,
I will always love you.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

My fave Lil crazy Pinay Poetess...Sam I Am...you would eat green eggs & ham on the train and under the bus...JK, you Love this person out of the country, in the cot...my goodness...this must be some boy...I Love your similes and analogies...just don't try heroin...dont try anything...in fact, don't grow up too fast...have fun...I was picking my booger and playing basketball at your age...well, I still pick my booger and play basketball...such an amorous heart...a future Pinay Princess Poetess.


Merry Christmas Abigail. ;)

[Destiny]

I love how anyone can relate. I love this poem

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This is so remarkable and Great! its Really Good. :)

[Audrey Nicole]

I like the similes you use. Your very detailed and expressed. Great write!