1888; Jack The Ripper

Jack the ripper...

1888,
The year of your doings,
White chapel, London,
The place of your hauntings.

The prostitutes had it coming,
Didn't they jack?
When you mailed half a kidney,
When you murdered many.

Leather apron,
White chapel murderer,
Jack....
The ripper.

I bet you,
Didn't think,
Think anything at all,
Like families or kids or even getting caught.

I know not,
Wether your out there,
I know not,
Why you did it.

I know,
You should have gotten caught,
How dare you, you got some balls,
Going on a killing spree....
All for some publicity.

I pray,
That you will burn in hell,
I wish,
That you never were.

If you didn't kill,
If you were normal,
You could have been happy,
You could of had help and delt with the seven souls situation.... But you didn't.

So burn leather apron,
Don't cry,
Take it like a man white chapel murderer,
Take hell and burning alive what you deserve Jack.

Was it something your dad did to you?
Was it really because you had seven souls?
Is it true about your seven souls living through kids?
And is it true...that you, Mr.Jack The Ripper that you never got caught?

One two jack is coming for you,
Three four you better lock the door,
Five six grab your crucifix,
Seven eight you better lock your gate,
Nine ten ...jack will be back again.

Author's Note

The last part I made up no one chanted this though if I were alive back then I would have :D lol
I attempted.... Like it????

Reviews

[Tiffany Elise]

Awesome poem....
But really abbie? "you got some balls." XD

[Leave me alone....]

love the end :) the whole pome was really good.

[crazysox]

Great job! I love the chant at the end :)
But I can't help but wonder....what if he WAS happy? What if he DID think about it? And what if he thought that killing these innocent people, or watching these families suffer, or just being a jerk in general, is what brought him true happiness?

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A stunning poem and love how you wrote about a topic that I'd never have thought you would... and made it stunningly sort of to that era...Love it and the chant :)

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My Goodness, this is so good,
Had me in suspense, I love this, it's so well written.
Wonderful write.