Taken

Can't waittill I'm 18:D

Taken.

Abandoned me,
Lied to me,
Dramatized my life,
Killed my pure soul.

Not a word,
For many years,
And then,
Unfortunately you came back.

Left me,
Corrupted me,
Murdered my child like personality.

I breathe no word of your name,
I can't believe you had the guts to come back,
After everything,
You slaughtered my life!

You,
Have taken,
My childhood,
My innocents.

I have a deep hatred for you,
I can not stand you,
You should fear me,
And if you don't.... Oh I promise you will very soon mother... very very soon.

Author's Note

As you have read this is dedicated to my mother
Who I as you read hate her with a passion....
If you saw me I'd have a devilish smile on my face and a death stare.

Reviews

[leinahtan]

haha. X) awesome poetry, stroke fear into me. yettttt it's as if i come closer i would get burnt by its passion. very strong, and i could break my hand if i would punch the conviction being held. it's that hard. haha :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Girl hate isn't good, but well it's understandable in this case but I'm sure things can only get better right?? It's upto her to try her best to make it all better a very fine write I must say :)