Forgotten

Forgotten

A Poem by Jane Doe

Forgotten

All good things,
Sweet dreams,
Even a chance at love,
Forgotten.

Every poem,
Every kiss,
And every hug,
Forgotten.

No memory left,
No pictures either,
After your crash,
There was a giant house fire.

So to top you now damaged self,
We have no house,
But then again it's like nothing to you,
Thou has forgotten.

It twas not you fault,
Merely life,
That throws hardships at us,
Left and right.

No goodbyes,
No scrapes bruises or any fall,
No sad sighs,
You managed to have forgotten it all.

You didn't choose,
To end up in the hospital bed,
Barely clinging to life because,
Of the nasty wound on you head.

But that disease took away everything and more,
Leaving me with nothing you stare at me confused as if I'm just a w***e,
But I'm not I'm your wife,
But that tree you crashed into.....
Just took you life.

© 2011 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
Hmmmssss I don't know if I meant took his life like by memories being stolen or like he died lol oh well u decide!:)
Xoxoxo
~abbie

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i can but clap my hands and marvel on this.

i can't write a review much constructive but that i am amazed by your genius inday. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was so great and you wrote that amazingly ..
i loved that :D


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it can works both ways, thats; the beauty of it, the readers interpretation and thoughts that are felt as one reads a poem, and you have achieved that so well, has depth an angle that provokes emotions, so excellent poem, just love it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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