Excuses Excuses

Contest!!:)

Excuses excuses

Coming home,
Drunk and lipstick all over you,
Saying you fell into some girl nothing really happened,
Excuses excuses.

Lying to me,
Saying she kissed you,
But you expect me to believe that my best friend kissed you,
Low life scum stop making excuses!

I need you,
Please stop for me,
Be a gentleman hold me and never let me go for…,
Our baby me you our feature.

Excuses excuses,
Lie after lie,
Stop it all it's time to man up,
So do it or just say goodbye.

Author's Note

So me and N.T.G are having a contest so just read it and pwweeeezzzzeee review:)

Reviews

[Canicus]

I like this there is anger and love I like the last stanza it's my favorite but it's a good poem altogether nice job keep up the work

[HisDark Angel4ever<3]

Love it..i can feel the emotions that you have felt when writing this..good write..^.^

[leinahtan]

i loveeeeeeeeee your poem. i declare this the winner! :) and i'm your prize. hahahahaha im i worth it? xP

[....]

oh wow, I am so sorry. I like the write, it's descriptive and use of wonderful imagery...This is quite an emotional write....xo