I have figured it out

I have figured it out

A Poem by Jane Doe
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I have figured it out


I've figured it out,
I'm in love,
With the thought,
Of being in love.

I have met many I really liked,
But they live so far away,
And the time zone,
I just haven't found him.

I am in love,
With the thought,
Of finding my perfect match,
I'm in love with being in love.

I want someone to hold me,
Kiss my forehead and hold my hand,
Just because they are in love,
With being in love … with me.

© 2011 Jane Doe


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I totally understand this feeling, the feeling of being in love with your thoughts on love. To think about what if must feel like to be that person, that one person that loves you for you, its easy to fall in love with that notion, that idea.
I've done it many times, thinking your in love and are not, or maybe we are? For who knows the paths of the heart but those who live within them? And since none of us but the Gods or creators live there, we will never know truly what lay within them, but only guess and assume.
So who are our neighbors to say we know not of love? That we are young and naiive?
The purest of love is that which is blissful and happy, not dark and brooding.
Continue to love the idea of love, and you will always have love with you, for without love we would be a sad sad and sorrowful world.
Peace

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the kind and gentle emotion in this poem. Your words are true. Love is holding hands and kisses on the forehead. Thank you for the beautiful poem of love.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


A sweet and touching poem. I can relate.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this and like I said he's out there somewhere good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I totally understand this feeling, the feeling of being in love with your thoughts on love. To think about what if must feel like to be that person, that one person that loves you for you, its easy to fall in love with that notion, that idea.
I've done it many times, thinking your in love and are not, or maybe we are? For who knows the paths of the heart but those who live within them? And since none of us but the Gods or creators live there, we will never know truly what lay within them, but only guess and assume.
So who are our neighbors to say we know not of love? That we are young and naiive?
The purest of love is that which is blissful and happy, not dark and brooding.
Continue to love the idea of love, and you will always have love with you, for without love we would be a sad sad and sorrowful world.
Peace

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love, a most frustrating emotion to understand, you gained ground within this piece, well done, good read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh yeah, it's great being in love and you expressed it so well, albeit the thought of it is splendid too, the imagination running wild :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so greaaaaaaaat
Excellent write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are so young, but so gifted with words already. Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

if my heart had a face, it would smile to this. :D

the words, are plain but they ring true and they are relative to me. :3

im sure a lot can relate to this too.

good jooooob inday! :D keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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