Chapter 1 :D

Ignore minor issues please and thank you

Reneè Michelle Henderson Angel

Have you ever had that weird sensation, or feel like someone is there watching you? Well were called observing ghost gangs o.g.g for short, our purpose is to watch over you. Most don't notice us around for the ones who do think we haunt them, but to be honest if we wanted we could easily disobey our orders and do that matter of fact some do! But I figured you might want to know why and what we really do.

Its kind of fun to be truthful, I mean your born, you live, you die, you come here. Besides a few orders a day it's free time all around! Who wouldn't want that? But the orders are basic you head o.g.g (h.o.g.g hehe Hogg ironically they do tend to be skinny and muscular), but your hogg gives you approximately two or three maybe even four in the morning. All you have to do is deliver when giving you the order they tell you a time slot fourty-eight  o.g.g's are assigned to living person (l.p). So after an hour or two your free to do as you please.

Jason(h.o.g.g) came up and began his nightly ritual. *BORING! yawn!!!!!! Jason shut u and just give us the frigging orders no one cares about you snide and snotty remarks to our question! So i snatched them and dealing them out then I stomped out of course steeping on his foot with my black stilettos that matched my white tee and black skinny cargos* HEY EARTH TO SPACE TRAVELER, RENEÈ SNAP OUT OF YOUR DAYDREAM!!!!! So now that      we have our R.m.h.a back I can continue my speech. Today each of you will have 3 orders, Reneè you have mrs. Hope Saunderrs from 2:30 a.m to 3:00, mr. Harold Dwall from3:05 to 4:00and mrs. Melissa Angel from 4:10 to 5:40. Dwayne you'll have blah blah.....WHAT!!!! I HAVE MY MOTHER!!!!! I can't...?! Just then I realized I yelled out loud.


A.N
Sorry I'm really bad at stories so I'm trying it but if you don't like it I'll take it down asap!!!! So hit my reviews up Pwweeeez?:) and you decide yay or nay?!?!???

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It's interesting...but some of it I didn't understand...I like the concept of the story and everything. I think you should explain some of the things in their mean. I would be able to understand it better. I have to say...most of your grammar is well done, but some words you missed a letter in it...just going to point that out.