A feast for sharks...Or Blood bath!

A feast for sharks...Or Blood bath!

A Poem by Jane Doe

In the dark,
No hope,
Hurt as if I were bit by a shark,
Do I deserve no love?

But I am his love.
His one and only or so he said,
He is mine no other,
He is angered at me though.

I cry,
And cry,
He doesn't wanna hurt me,
Or does he?

I wish,
Upon a star,
To end my existence,
Let this pain carry on no further.

I wished,
It didn't come true,
So tonight,
A feast for sharks cause I can't take it anymore...

© 2011 Jane Doe


Author's Note

Jane Doe
Wrote this in school AhAh

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WOW. this is beautiful. absolutely admirable. paints animated pictures in my imaginings!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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