Crayons...

Black crayons are used to outline,

Like whoes and stripers,

Puple is only used,

Becaue it is pretty.

 

Blue is used by depressed people,

To hide their own pain,

Pink is used as a show-y off prop,

It's a high class crayon.

 

Orange is used to color happy things,

Make them or someone else happpy,

Red is used to represent love,

But even red is USED.

 

Green and Yellow are used,

To express feelings or to dis-obey,

But if I was a

White crayon,

I'd neer be used no reason to cry and get hurt because im useless.

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

The colours and the structure stand out and its a unique piece. I like the fun nature of your wording and your structure and the uses of the colouring is a clever touch. Apart from a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes in the last line this poem was fun and good to read.